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FireBlaze
Posts : 3144 Join date : 2015-08-13
| Subject: Re: Private with Fire Thu Jan 14, 2016 6:02 am | |
| The leader snarled, waving his paw for his warriors to move the kit to a protected den. "You do not order me, kit. Their blood will be on your paws." He grinned sadistically, unsheathing his claws as he pictures his ex-mate running into the camp. Who should he kill first? Her? Or her mate? He yelled after the kit. "Which one would you prefer to see die first?" | |
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Lovebird
Posts : 11635 Join date : 2015-08-12 Location : Under a rock
| Subject: Re: Private with Fire Thu Jan 14, 2016 1:27 am | |
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Lovebird
Posts : 11635 Join date : 2015-08-12 Location : Under a rock
| Subject: Re: Private with Fire Tue Jan 12, 2016 3:12 pm | |
| The five moon old kit shrank back, her father's green eyes shimmering with fear and tears. "No! Don't hurt them!" she wailed, huddling in a ball on the ground. "I'm sorry for exploring in your territory! I won't do it again! Just don't hurt them!" She sobbed, a trembling ball of black fur with one red paw. | |
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FireBlaze
Posts : 3144 Join date : 2015-08-13
| Subject: Re: Private with Fire Tue Jan 12, 2016 6:32 am | |
| He laughed, letting go of her ear and swiping her away. "Dumb kit. You know what's going to happen, right? Your precious parents will come right here in my camp...and I'll have no choice but to kill them, right in front of you." He let out a malicious grin, his white teeth showing.
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Lovebird
Posts : 11635 Join date : 2015-08-12 Location : Under a rock
| Subject: Re: Private with Fire Tue Jan 12, 2016 6:07 am | |
| Nightkit cried out in pain, swiping at him with her soft kit paws. "Stop it! That hurts!" She wailed, her green eyes shimmering with tears. I want Pineleaf and Blackstar! Mommy, Daddy, where are you? I'm sorry! | |
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FireBlaze
Posts : 3144 Join date : 2015-08-13
| Subject: Re: Private with Fire Tue Jan 12, 2016 6:06 am | |
| Stormstar shook his head. "Now, now, you know exploring another clan's territory is forbidden. You shall be punished." He perked his ears as a thought came to him. He knew Blackstar would be bringing his clan to rescue his daughter. It was just a matter of when. Grunting in distaste, he leaned down and grabbed the kit's ear, pulling on it roughly with his teeth. | |
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Lovebird
Posts : 11635 Join date : 2015-08-12 Location : Under a rock
| Subject: Re: Private with Fire Tue Jan 12, 2016 6:04 am | |
| Pineleaf raced alongside her mate, eyes cold. If you've harmed her, Stormstar....
Nightkit stared up at the grey tom with wide eyes, trembling with fear. "I-I was just exploring," she whimpered, her ears flattening. | |
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FireBlaze
Posts : 3144 Join date : 2015-08-13
| Subject: Re: Private with Fire Tue Jan 12, 2016 6:02 am | |
| (I'll wing it!)
Blackstar nodded back, knowing his mate would want to come. He waved her to run by his side before turning and pelting out of camp, waving his tail as he heard the immense pounding of paws behind him. War was coming.
Meanwhile, at Beechclan's camp, the newly named Stormstar stalked out of the den, a smirk on his face as he approached his ex-mate's daughter. Stopping in front of her, he stared down at her small form. "What is this?" he rumbled smugly. "Why are you on my territory, little kitten?" | |
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Lovebird
Posts : 11635 Join date : 2015-08-12 Location : Under a rock
| Subject: Re: Private with Fire Tue Jan 12, 2016 5:56 am | |
| (He's your cat :3 Im still trying to decide what the Clan will be doing with Nightkit.... Cuz she's too young to use as a slave)
Pineleaf gave her mate a firm nod, her expression grim. I'm coming and I'd like to see someone try to stop me. Nothing will prevent me from rescuing my daughter. | |
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FireBlaze
Posts : 3144 Join date : 2015-08-13
| Subject: Re: Private with Fire Tue Jan 12, 2016 5:53 am | |
| (> perfect. Who should rp his pov?) Blackstar nodded and lifted his head. Storming out of the den, he threw his head back and yowled to the clan to gather. He launched into what had happened, and what he was doing, by ending his speech with: "we're going to war. No prisoners, no mercy. Just get my kit back." He saw mixed emotions within the crowd, but he knew they'd obey. Turning to his mate, he tilted his head questioningly, asking if she wanted to come. | |
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Lovebird
Posts : 11635 Join date : 2015-08-12 Location : Under a rock
| Subject: Re: Private with Fire Tue Jan 12, 2016 4:55 am | |
| (Omg, what if Stormfur was the one who MADE BeechClan???? :O) | |
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Lovebird
Posts : 11635 Join date : 2015-08-12 Location : Under a rock
| Subject: Re: Private with Fire Tue Jan 12, 2016 12:16 am | |
| (What if Stormfur had joined BeechClan? ) | |
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Lovebird
Posts : 11635 Join date : 2015-08-12 Location : Under a rock
| Subject: Re: Private with Fire Mon Jan 11, 2016 3:10 pm | |
| Pineleaf stepped forward and touched her nose to Blackstar's ear. "You're the leader. You can't keep an eye on her at all times," she murmured, her green eyes sad but determined. "We will get her back, or die trying."
Meanwhile, at the BeechClan camp, the patrol leader, Oakstripe, had instructed the apprentice, Smokepaw, to keep Nightkit in the middle of camp while he went to speak with the leader.
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FireBlaze
Posts : 3144 Join date : 2015-08-13
| Subject: Re: Private with Fire Mon Jan 11, 2016 6:13 am | |
| He nodded, grateful for his mate's support. But before he went to rally the clan, he turned to her with a sorrowful gaze. "I'm sorry, I should've been watching her, but..." he hung his head in shame. | |
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Lovebird
Posts : 11635 Join date : 2015-08-12 Location : Under a rock
| Subject: Re: Private with Fire Mon Jan 11, 2016 5:52 am | |
| "I'm going with you," Pineleaf hissed, her narrowed eyes and furious tone leaving no room for argument. How dare BeechClan steal her daughter! If they had harmed even one hair on her pelt..... | |
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FireBlaze
Posts : 3144 Join date : 2015-08-13
| Subject: Re: Private with Fire Mon Jan 11, 2016 5:47 am | |
| He didn't bother waiting for his escorts, his eyes narrowing into pure fury. Spinning around, he sprinted back over the border and to his camp. He already knew what he was going to do, but at what cost? He ran into camp and to the nursery, shoving his head in to tell his mate what had just occurred. When he finished, he ended it with: "We're going to invade their camp, and kill as many as we can." | |
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Lovebird
Posts : 11635 Join date : 2015-08-12 Location : Under a rock
| Subject: Re: Private with Fire Sun Jan 10, 2016 5:14 am | |
| "Yeah, yeah, whatever," the tom said, waving his tail dismissively. "Rockfang, Stormclaw, escort this tom back to the border." | |
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FireBlaze
Posts : 3144 Join date : 2015-08-13
| Subject: Re: Private with Fire Sun Jan 10, 2016 5:04 am | |
| He felt his eyes water, knowing he couldn't do anything by himself. He felt utterly helpless. "F-fine! But promise me you won't hurt her." | |
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Lovebird
Posts : 11635 Join date : 2015-08-12 Location : Under a rock
| Subject: Re: Private with Fire Sun Jan 10, 2016 2:16 am | |
| The leader, a large, muscular, brown tabby, got in front of Blackstar and sneered at him. "I think not. This kit is ours now. And you better get out before we attack." | |
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FireBlaze
Posts : 3144 Join date : 2015-08-13
| Subject: Re: Private with Fire Sun Jan 10, 2016 2:14 am | |
| He saw the apprentice snatch his daughter up, and he yowled in fury. "Put her down! I have to take her home to her mother." He padded over, knowing he couldn't take on 6 enemies at once. It wouldn't save his kit. | |
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Lovebird
Posts : 11635 Join date : 2015-08-12 Location : Under a rock
| Subject: Re: Private with Fire Sun Jan 10, 2016 2:11 am | |
| Nightkit stared out of the bush at the six cats, eyes wide.
The leader of the patrol merely gave Blackstar a disdainful glance, sniffing the air before directing an apprentice to the bush Nightkit was in.
The apprentice darted over to the bush, snatching up Nightkit. | |
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FireBlaze
Posts : 3144 Join date : 2015-08-13
| Subject: Re: Private with Fire Sun Jan 10, 2016 2:10 am | |
| He stopped, horrified. But surely they wouldn't harm kits? He hailed the warriors over, making them aware of his presence. "I'm looking for a lost kitten!" he called, still not able to see Nightkit. | |
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Lovebird
Posts : 11635 Join date : 2015-08-12 Location : Under a rock
| Subject: Re: Private with Fire Sun Jan 10, 2016 1:56 am | |
| The strong scent of BeechClan suddenly swept over both Blackstar and Nightkit. There must have been at least five. | |
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FireBlaze
Posts : 3144 Join date : 2015-08-13
| Subject: Re: Private with Fire Sun Jan 10, 2016 1:53 am | |
| Blackstar yowled again, slowing down. Where was she? | |
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Lovebird
Posts : 11635 Join date : 2015-08-12 Location : Under a rock
| Subject: Re: Private with Fire Sun Jan 10, 2016 1:42 am | |
| Nightkit poked at the beetle she'd been following, watching it curiously. What was the purpose of its life? | |
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